Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 some changes that I made while revising my paragraphs would have been the type of elements that I was putting into it I also realize the type of effort that it's needed to it what revising and reviewing my paragraph I realized that I need to focus on my punctuation how to write the paragraph in the best manner well Friday my paragraphs I decided to improve on the type of effort that is needed to put into it the type of quotes and how to explain the quotes I realized that my explanation and the way I write isn't perfect and it doesn't need to be perfect but it has to be better while writing my paragraph I also realized how to pick quotes and how to explain them better my writing has always been something that I've thought about as with deep understandment and deeper meaning not only is it something that's being written about something or someone else it also has something to do with me it can be comprehensive and make me feel seen such as others not only can they help me understand how I'm feeling but it can help others know how they are feeling finding the correct quotes and how to explain them will help the paragraphs a lot of perfectly so that essays understandable and readable while writing my draft I realize that I have very much to improve on but my teacher giving me feedback is very helpful and is very understandable to what I need to develop and work on, today in class we finished writing our paragraphs and turn them in, today I learned to trust and to not overthink because sometimes it is okay to be quiet and to let things go than to rush it and force it.

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