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Prompt: Reflect on your writing process for essays. Which part of writing an essay do you struggle with the most (for example: developing a thesis, organizing ideas, finding strong evidence, writing introductions, or explaining your analysis)? Which parts of essay writing do you feel most confident about? Explain why you feel strong in those areas and what specifically makes the challenging part difficult for you. Include at least one goal for how you plan to improve your essay writing skills.

 When i was writing my essay i became very conscious of how unaware i was about not truly knowing how to understand and write a well essay as i was writing i could not understand what i was saying and writing it really made me struggle bout what i was going to say next i also did not know how to explain the quotes and what to say with them an explanation that would match the next sentence and it would all make the perfect paragraph I truly didn't understand the meaning of writing an essay or how to do it perfectly but it really became an experience that I can grow and learn from I definitely understood how to write an essay better than what I had in the last couple of years it became easier and truly stuck to me about what I had to do next I do have another class that I have to write an essay for and this really made me understand how to write an essay I would say in this situation not only did I win on understanding season how to write them but I also will get a most efficient gra...

Prompt: As we move toward the end of the semester, what are your top three college choices right now? Identify the colleges and explain why you are attracted to each one. Even if college is not currently on your radar, you must still respond to the question and explain your thinking.

 as this semester is coming to an end I'm starting to get even more overwhelmed with a type of colleges that I have to choose how to look into them and what they need to apply but at the moment the three colleges that I am very proudly looking forward to would be Georgia Southern Georgia State University and or Augusta University the reason that I'm looking into these colleges or universities would have been for their programs of dental hygienist or dental assistant the reason that I have been looking into Georgia Southern would have been that there dental hygienist program or their Dental Associates program it has a very new building to it their program has very new additions to it that would help me learn in the bigger environment than what it used to be the building being brand new and opened up just for this makes me feel seen and heard for what I deserve and for what I need the reason that I am looking into Georgia State University would be that it seems more efficient clo...

Prompt: During brainstorming, one idea usually stands out. What is the most interesting or strongest idea you came up with for your essay, and what made you choose it over the others?

Are the brainstorming one of the ideas that really stood out to me would have how does isolation help a person understand themselves or find themselves as a person that has been isolated or has pushed people away this has been as strongest idea for me it helps me understand what is Cheryl went through and completed with me it helps me and it makes it easier for me to connect certain quotes to the type of emotion or feeling that she has ever felt it also helps me understand what the part of the essay is going to be about what type of clothes I have to look for and how to connect them in to the type of events that happened this idea is something that comes very easy to me it is very understandable and is very unique to me and to others it's going to help others understand what Cheryl went through in the easier topic or logic this brainstorming idea also have a very deep meaning to others more than me what made me choose this topic would have been the depth of each meaning of the quot...

Prompt: After completing the assignments on making college affordable and finding the best college fit, what is one thing you learned that you did not know before? Why do you think this information is important for seniors to understand?

 after completing the assignment on making College affordable and finding the best fit one thing I learned was how to apply for colleges and what most colleges ask for that is something that you're not taught in the beginning of the school year only towards the end of the school year when you're reaching the point where you are either going to college or not you get the option to choose what type of colleges and what majors you want to study that is something that I thought was very interesting towards the end of the year for me I really got to be able to understand choose what would be the best fit for me what kind of things did I want to study I think this information is very important to seniors or upperclassmen because not a lot of people that want to go to college know how to apply to college or what the type of information that is needed that is something that is very important because from Most universities or colleges need for you to apply so they know who they are goin...

Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 some changes that I made while revising my paragraphs would have been the type of elements that I was putting into it I also realize the type of effort that it's needed to it what revising and reviewing my paragraph I realized that I need to focus on my punctuation how to write the paragraph in the best manner well Friday my paragraphs I decided to improve on the type of effort that is needed to put into it the type of quotes and how to explain the quotes I realized that my explanation and the way I write isn't perfect and it doesn't need to be perfect but it has to be better while writing my paragraph I also realized how to pick quotes and how to explain them better my writing has always been something that I've thought about as with deep understandment and deeper meaning not only is it something that's being written about something or someone else it also has something to do with me it can be comprehensive and make me feel seen such as others not only can they he...

Prompt: Today we discussed why academic writing must reflect your own thinking and understanding rather than relying on artificial intelligence to generate your ideas. After learning about the expectations for authentic writing, reflect on why it is important for students to write essays in their own words.

 Today we discussed about artificial intelligence and our own writing and how to understand it reflecting on my own writing compared to AI there is a huge difference AI something that doesn't know how a person might feel or get information from the internet from other people artificial intelligence is also not a reliable source when it comes to writing it can give you false information and give you other people's work this makes it not understandable and difficult for others not only are you stealing other people's work and taking credit for it but you are making it less understandable than it's supposed to be while writing your own essays with your own words you get to put your own feelings and problems into it you get to give a feel of what it feels like for others and what it feels like to you sometimes while writing your own essay instead of it being artificial intelligence you get to understand yourself you also get to think about what's been other people's...

Prompt: Today we focused on constructing a strong literary argument paragraph about Wild and whether discomfort is necessary for meaningful personal growth. After working through the claim-evidence-analysis structure, explain which part of the paragraph was most challenging for you and why. Do you find it more difficult to create an arguable claim or to move beyond summary in your analysis?

 today while focusing on constructing a strong literary argument paragraph about wild about is discomfort necessary well writing this paragraph I thought about the sentences to evidence the claim and the thought that went into five sentences something that would make it perfect something that would make it align with the whole chapter or the whole story that has to be written writing this paragraph made me understand how so many challenges can be brought up to choosing the perfect evidence to choosing the perfect quote to choosing the perfect type of steps trying to read passages to find the quote that would really align with what you want to say the challenge while writing my paragraph would have been choosing the quotes and how to explain them how to align them with is discomfort necessary while writing my paragraph I overcame the challenges by slowly reading the quote and then reading is this Comfort necessary I thought about my problems and thought about Cheryl's problems I rea...